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Commentary critique

In the commentary "U.S. consuls already have the tools to discriminate in Visa decisions" the writer discusses how discrimination against immigrants trying to receive a Visa or overstay their Visa is very biased. I believe the intended audience the writer is trying to convey these opinions to is someone who is affected by these Visa decisions or family of immigrants who are also affected as well as just informing the general public on the process and how these decisions are made. Also to explain the faults in this place of business. By using personal experience and scenarios the writer paints a clear picture of how a Visa interview might go or how they have gone and explains the turnout and aftermath of that individual who was denied a visa or was given a visa. The writer talks about the type of people who get turned down or people who would automatically receive their Visa. The discrimination towards these individuals is biased because interviewers mostly go off of first impressions. Which the writer states her herself have told immigrants going in for interviews that they should just be themselves but the outcomes were different for ones who listened and for the ones who didn't listen. She gave two examples of this in her commentary about meeting two transgender women one who decided to be open about it to the ones interviewing her and the other who thought it was best to present herself as male as it shows in her identification. Which for her ended in receiving her visa automatically, and the other who wanted a visa in order to continue her education did not receive a visa but was denied one three times. The writer's concern is that this discrimination should not continue and that these certain factors that make up an individual shouldn't be overlooked.

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